Part 2
I had to read both before I commented.
Oh Chris! May I make a suggestion? Take her somewhere else next time. Go to her home or a hotel.
You should get rid of all the reminders dotted around the house.
My heart goes out to you.
Hugs
your words always arrive with care and compassion. part 3 will be out shortly.
I look forward to that.
I like all the fragments with commas. Your mix of emotions. The way you’re trying to stay in the moment.
Dante, thank you for your careful and perceptive reading. i hope you enjoy the final part of this piece, which should come out later today.
I had to read both before I commented.
Oh Chris! May I make a suggestion? Take her somewhere else next time. Go to her home or a hotel.
You should get rid of all the reminders dotted around the house.
My heart goes out to you.
Hugs
your words always arrive with care and compassion. part 3 will be out shortly.
I look forward to that.
I like all the fragments with commas. Your mix of emotions. The way you’re trying to stay in the moment.
Dante, thank you for your careful and perceptive reading. i hope you enjoy the final part of this piece, which should come out later today.